Dave is sent out on a mission, he's no will of his own and in a nervous state, his girlfriend and tutor continue to search for him.
I very much like the ideas and concepts, but feel the narrative is pretty muddled. Maybe it's the way the story is being told, or the characters and their motivations, it is just a little hard to follow, but good.
Dave is a very mixed up character, and i am struggling to work out why his family are so aloof, why it's only his girlfriend that has any concern for him.
6/10
I very much like the ideas and concepts, but feel the narrative is pretty muddled. Maybe it's the way the story is being told, or the characters and their motivations, it is just a little hard to follow, but good.
Dave is a very mixed up character, and i am struggling to work out why his family are so aloof, why it's only his girlfriend that has any concern for him.
6/10