Shot with a 1990s video camera, edited by enthusiastic high school students, written on a slow rainy afternoon by someone with little or no prior script writing experience, cast by the the creators spare family members and the entire set rented for a day from the local Wild West Ghost Town Tourist Experience, this would be a perfectly adequate first attempt if indeed made by the aforesaid high school students. Sadly however it seems to be.. um serious.
I mean, its not bad per se. I guess. If it was indeed made by kids. I'd certainly applaud at their effort. It is now however what I'd call broadcast quality or something I'd expect to see on any sort of commercial network. SOME of the actors are ok with their roles, as in one or two of them, however ALL of the rest are really really.. wooden. Really.
I probably couldnt do better.
An extra point for using a Wilhelm Scream..Then I took it off for the accidental 'shakey cam' effects.
I mean, its not bad per se. I guess. If it was indeed made by kids. I'd certainly applaud at their effort. It is now however what I'd call broadcast quality or something I'd expect to see on any sort of commercial network. SOME of the actors are ok with their roles, as in one or two of them, however ALL of the rest are really really.. wooden. Really.
I probably couldnt do better.
An extra point for using a Wilhelm Scream..Then I took it off for the accidental 'shakey cam' effects.
