There are large parts of the film dependant on reading text messages on screen. That can work if done for a small amount, or with a shorter story, but for this it just slowed things down. There were plenty of shots which didn't seem to add to the story, or could have been made shorter to keep things moving. That wouldn't have transformed the film, but it would have improved it. The characters react weirdly and make some odd decisions.
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