Once a big fan of this series, it seems to be grinding to a halt lately, with lazy and unrealistic writing. 3 cases in point:
1) Beth as the ballet coach: The scene at the showcase recital when the dancer falls down. How ridiculous that Beth comes running onstage and proceeds to have a slow dim-witted conversation with the girl about what she should do. The audience is still present! You would think they were out for coffee! Beth as a character was obviously a failed dancer, because as any performer knows, if you fall and you are not injured (the girl told Beth she wasn't), you immediately get up and continue where you left off. You don't have a summit about it onstage with your ballet instructor right in the middle of the recital! To top it off, Randall in the audience tells his girls to always remember how great their mother was!
2) As others have noted, it was very wrong of Madison to want to take the twins for Thanksgiving dinner to Elijah's. Kevin and Madison may no longer be "together," but they are united as a family by their twins. Elijah is nobody's father. He is not even engaged to Madison. Madison has always been my least favorite character. Her selfish and superficial nature was evident right when she was introduced in the series as befriending Kate, while being very mean to her. Even Kate was on Madison's side. Is this really the moral message that the writers are sending?
3) The former Miguel--Rebecca--Matt triangle is getting very "tired" already. As a writer, you never want your audience to get ahead of the characters' intelligence. It is so obvious to everyone that Miguel is in love with 'Becca, and the only character who seems not to notice is 'Becca!
I am trying to make it to the last episode, but I may not make it. Time for some new writers. The characters seem to be getting dumber and dumber each week.
1) Beth as the ballet coach: The scene at the showcase recital when the dancer falls down. How ridiculous that Beth comes running onstage and proceeds to have a slow dim-witted conversation with the girl about what she should do. The audience is still present! You would think they were out for coffee! Beth as a character was obviously a failed dancer, because as any performer knows, if you fall and you are not injured (the girl told Beth she wasn't), you immediately get up and continue where you left off. You don't have a summit about it onstage with your ballet instructor right in the middle of the recital! To top it off, Randall in the audience tells his girls to always remember how great their mother was!
2) As others have noted, it was very wrong of Madison to want to take the twins for Thanksgiving dinner to Elijah's. Kevin and Madison may no longer be "together," but they are united as a family by their twins. Elijah is nobody's father. He is not even engaged to Madison. Madison has always been my least favorite character. Her selfish and superficial nature was evident right when she was introduced in the series as befriending Kate, while being very mean to her. Even Kate was on Madison's side. Is this really the moral message that the writers are sending?
3) The former Miguel--Rebecca--Matt triangle is getting very "tired" already. As a writer, you never want your audience to get ahead of the characters' intelligence. It is so obvious to everyone that Miguel is in love with 'Becca, and the only character who seems not to notice is 'Becca!
I am trying to make it to the last episode, but I may not make it. Time for some new writers. The characters seem to be getting dumber and dumber each week.
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