First scene, boom! Conflictual and spectacular. Then 40 minutes of boring moments, of harmony, of "how nice has Danny become". Last scene : dad gives Danny a check and wants him out. Typical of writers who know what the last scene is going to be and think it's cool to put 40 minutes of nothing before the storm. THAT DOES NOT WORK. Even if the audience senses this harmony won't last, we want to skip to the chase. A few seconds of harmony, joy, laughter, OK (like in "Jaws", just before the shark attacks the boat) but not 40 minutes.
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