It started out okay, but it just didn't click with me other than I wanted to know who the killer was at the end. Siena's murder wasn't addressed at the end. Too many things happened that would make anyone question why Deanna would still be there. Clearly someone was trying to hurt her. And 2 murders at the mansion didn't seem to clue anyone in that this was a bad place.
And the title. Why would it be called Engaged to a Psycho when her fiance wasn't the psycho. So I think Murder at the Mansion would be a much better title.
And the title. Why would it be called Engaged to a Psycho when her fiance wasn't the psycho. So I think Murder at the Mansion would be a much better title.