This was such an awesome story, and it caught me way off guard! It was interesting on its own, following a boy that had his own problems he was battling. Then came Richard and HIS demons. The haunting creatures in this gave me nightmares! I rarely get scared after seeing so many scary movies, but this one had me not wanting to open my eyes in my dark bedroom! Great development for a short story, but don't plan on getting to sleep soon after watching it!