Rating: 6.9
For some reason, I felt like this could've been condensed. A lot of times there would be nothing happening, not even inner monologues. This made the pacing feel very slow. Overall it was ok and served its purpose in setting up the next two parts.
For some reason, I felt like this could've been condensed. A lot of times there would be nothing happening, not even inner monologues. This made the pacing feel very slow. Overall it was ok and served its purpose in setting up the next two parts.