I didn't care for the negotiations or nonsense, but the away mission on a planet, with a creature, and phasers, was kinda fun. Less Burnam centric and focus on the other characters please. Less Burnam and Less Tilly. Delve into the supporting characters. Pick some bridge crew person (like a Sulu or ensign Kim etc.) and FLESH. THEM. OUT. This show isn't just about Burnam.
Star Trek is supposed to generate awe and wonder. Star Trek is about discovery. Exploration. Science fiction. Please try to remember that and lose the soap opera nonsense. Develop characters, but in a real way. This is not the audience for Dawson's Creek or Riverdale. The giggly Tilly thing was ludicrous. Have you been in the military or any major organization? In what world, honestly, would someone like Tilly be the captain? Think guys. THINK. You're not really selling it too well.
2. Can they just have some down time. Get them off the darkness of the ship. Get them in the Grand Canyon, Albertan Wilderness. Visually it's tiresome after a while. Open it up.
Star Trek is supposed to generate awe and wonder. Star Trek is about discovery. Exploration. Science fiction. Please try to remember that and lose the soap opera nonsense. Develop characters, but in a real way. This is not the audience for Dawson's Creek or Riverdale. The giggly Tilly thing was ludicrous. Have you been in the military or any major organization? In what world, honestly, would someone like Tilly be the captain? Think guys. THINK. You're not really selling it too well.
2. Can they just have some down time. Get them off the darkness of the ship. Get them in the Grand Canyon, Albertan Wilderness. Visually it's tiresome after a while. Open it up.