Hello, Corran here. You told me to review this movie as well as WATCHDOGS because it is your most recent. This means you no longer have the excuse that you made it when you were younger as this came out in 2017.
This movie is, no doubt, an improvement on WATCHDOGS. For one, most of the shots are in focus. It has some interesting and visually stimulating shots which were all nice surprises after watching your other 3 movies. The costume was pretty good, though almost identical to that of Starlord in GOTG, and the music choice was alright, but again the same song was used in GOTG 2.
However, you can have as many good shots as you want in a movie but it has to have a coherent and obviously portrayed story. Without this, anyone who watches it has to think about what just happened after the movie has finished and, unless the movie is meant to be thought provoking (which this is not), that is bad. If there is no story, how is one meant to be engaged in what is happening. Even if it is a short film it still needs a story and a character we understand. The editing of the whole movie was really poor as well. If you are going to have a scene based around a song then at least edit the shots so they fit the beats of that song.
Whilst this is your best movie, it still isn't good. Hopefully the fact that I'm saying this will help you realise a few of your mistakes and improve upon this movie. If you try to read this as me giving you tips rather than me hating on your content then you might see that some of what I am saying could help you in actually making a movie that isn't bad. 2/10.
Corran.
This movie is, no doubt, an improvement on WATCHDOGS. For one, most of the shots are in focus. It has some interesting and visually stimulating shots which were all nice surprises after watching your other 3 movies. The costume was pretty good, though almost identical to that of Starlord in GOTG, and the music choice was alright, but again the same song was used in GOTG 2.
However, you can have as many good shots as you want in a movie but it has to have a coherent and obviously portrayed story. Without this, anyone who watches it has to think about what just happened after the movie has finished and, unless the movie is meant to be thought provoking (which this is not), that is bad. If there is no story, how is one meant to be engaged in what is happening. Even if it is a short film it still needs a story and a character we understand. The editing of the whole movie was really poor as well. If you are going to have a scene based around a song then at least edit the shots so they fit the beats of that song.
Whilst this is your best movie, it still isn't good. Hopefully the fact that I'm saying this will help you realise a few of your mistakes and improve upon this movie. If you try to read this as me giving you tips rather than me hating on your content then you might see that some of what I am saying could help you in actually making a movie that isn't bad. 2/10.
Corran.